Revising Essay 2 in part based on my feedback but mostly based on your own abilities to apply revision strategies conveyed in our textbook (and assigned again for you to study prior to completing this activity) has the potential to offer you important writing skills that will benefit you in all other writing situations.
That’s why you’re assigned to do this. Earning an A grade on your original Essay 2 doesn’t mean that essay cannot be greatly improved. The revisions may be less substantial at first glance, but the difference between a single word choice, just one word, can be the difference between lightening and a lightening bug. Go for the lightening. (And I stole that line from Mark Twain.)
Reconsider your introduction strategy, refine your thesis, improve your body paragraphs’ unity, coherence, and development, finish the essay with a more effective closing section.
Eliminate every sentence level error, every typo.
You can increase the over all word length by 200, if that helps.
Your choice to do that or not.
One choice you don’t have is that you must integrate into your essay an effective image that you refer to in writing and that you cite according to MLA rules. Failure to include an image will result in a failing grade on the revision of Essay 2. See Envision 238 for MLA guidance.
Your grade will be based on how much improvement you have made to the essay’s unity, coherence, and development.
Take a look at some online articles/essays, and notice how they often include images to help appeal to a reader’s emotion or reason. You need to utilize an image/figure/picture/photo in Essay 2’s revised document, and using more than one image is fine, if doing so is effective.
At Course Docs, below the Essay Assignment folder, you’ll find three resources that should help you understand how to integrate an image into your essay text and how to cite it on a works cited page.
Take a look at some online articles/essays, and notice how they often include images to help appeal to a reader’s emotion or reason. You need to utilize an image/figure/picture/photo in Essay 2’s revised document, and using more than one image is fine, if doing so is effective.
At Course Docs, below the Essay Assignment folder, you’ll find three resources that should help you understand how to integrate an image into your essay text and how to cite it on a works cited page.
Take a look at some online articles/essays, and notice how they often include images to help appeal to a reader’s emotion or reason. You need to utilize an image/figure/picture/photo in Essay 2’s revised document, and using more than one image is fine, if doing so is effective.
At Course Docs, below the Essay Assignment folder, you’ll find three resources that should help you understand how to integrate an image into your essay text and how to cite it on a works cited page.Using Figures in MLA Format
1. Insert figures (photographs, charts, diagrams, and so on) centered below the text that addresses them. Maintain double spacing and one-inch margins.
2. Write (see fig. 1.) or a similar expression in the text before the figure, but do not italicize.
3. Label Figure 1 as Fig. 1., not italicized.
4. Below the figure, write a caption, or phrase that describes what it is.
5. Follow the caption with an explanation of the figure, enough so that someone looking at visuals but not reading your paper can understand the figure.
6. Follow the explanation with the citation information for the figure in MLA format. Write to the margins on both sides of the paper. If the figure is not cited in the text but has complete citation information in the caption, citing the source also on the works-cited page is not required.
https://www.clinton.edu/DouglasLibrary/MLAImage.cxml
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