this is the feedback from the supervisor, we now need to extend the work to reach 4000 words, so can you please use the attached work that you have done before and expand it in a proposal style to reach 4000 and use 20 reference
The author provides a balanced and effective introduction to the topic of cheque fraud along with an appropriate and (for a MSc dissertation project) manageable set of research questions to compare the UAE and the USA. The literature review is very helpfully divided into key themes that correspond with the research questions, and the author notes that the literature should contribute towards answering some aspects of the research questions and generating new leads for further research. The graphic on numbers of transaction payments over time was instructive. The research methodology provides an effective discussion of the issues and puts forward an ambitious agenda for phone-based interviews with research participants in the UAE and the USA. The researcher will need to give some thought to the practicalities of phone-based interviews with respect to the signing of consent forms and related factors. Hopefully, the researcher has the relevant access to networks in both countries.
criminals to execute violent [vile, violence typically means physical injury] acts such as defrauding individuals as well as financial institutions, Federal Researve [Reserve], Qualitative research is enhances interactions [Qualitative research enhances interactions]
This work offers considerable clarity of expression and purpose and is really well organised. The author is to be commended for the organisation and presentation of this work. Future submissions could be improved through more focus on academic journal articles. Note that items in [square brackets] refer to corrections and notes relating to corrections and identification of good practice in academic writing.
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